Editing Blog: What Changes We Need

 Our Peer Reviewer said that our video was short and needed titles which we knew. But also said that we need to add more story which is what that missing time would make up for. He said we were only missing three out of the fifteen shots which was good. Overall he said our video would get a C or C+. With that information we were ready to make changes. After we finished Peer Reviewing video we decided that we'd plan out what were going to change. We decided that we'd do our re shooting on the weekend of Saturday but with that time we'd have to do many things. The two main things we had to do was add our titles and make it a minute and 50. We couldn't accomplish these things due to time restraint. Kyle had to little of time to edit after we shot our video. We made a new storyboard while not as long or detailed we split it up into 6 sections with a total run time of 1:50. The storyboard is a rough sketch but I'll explain it. The first Box is about him wanting to become a superhero showing what he idolizes. The second is him being bullied by his mom her being cruel. Third Him taking the knife from the kitchen. Fourth creates Tension of him approaching his family. Fifth him killing his parents while they are asleep. And last the ending piece that the police coming to his front door knocking. This will surely help us with our time restraint since each piece being 10-30 minutes long. We already have most of the scenes we can just add more scenes based of the six sections that we split our video up into if one piece is lacking we add a bit more time one compared to a section that doesn't take long like section 4 Our next problem was our titles. We decided that for titles we should use a bright color like white since most of our scenes we're pretty dark. we didn't want our titles o blend in with the background we want them to be vivid and to properly show everyone contribution to our project. with all those problems accounted for our re-shooting process will be a breeze all we have to do is decide on a schedule and a couple of other things.

Rough sketch of new storyboard